Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Mr. Andersons Anger issues, Bonnie

 "Aw man someone has crashed my car" Mr. Anderson half shouted and his voice was gruff. It was like we weren't even there. Then he slammed his chair on the ground. His face was redder than ever. The whole class was silent. He slammed his phone down with rage. After that he stomped his way around the mat then said "I'll be out for a minute" then slammed the door frame. Then we started filling the class with heaps
of questions.

2 comments:

  1. Great story Bonnie, loved the descriptions in there, especially 'filling the class with heaps of questions' - awesome!
    Tracy

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  2. Great story bonnie. Nice descriptive language. I liked...the whole story. Well done Bonnie!

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