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Week 3 100 WC 

 

 

alien corban

                                                        room 8's 100 word challenge



alien by corban

… and then I saw a bright light… it had landed, the light faded, I held on to the trunk of the pine I had clung on to for the support I so dearly needed. I felt warmth creeping up my paralyzed body, I peered down at my shoes, a thick gunk had set like cement I tried to wriggle, I screamed, the door opened of the shuttle, a strange creature had scuttled out gripping a stick, I reached for my rifle but the being was too fast its pale arms glimmered in the moon light, it mumbled to me one single word… its mouth opened “boo.”   

 

White To Black, Jayden


… And then I saw a bright light… My eyes wept in pain as the light shattered my view. Aching pains trembled my eyes like it was my last sight. I hung on to a branch on the towering tree not knowing what was creeping at me, targeting me. “Crack” the branch flew away like a magnet was sucking it in. I screamed in agony. Was this the end…?

Then “whoosh” the light was flickered out of my sight, the eerie moonlight haunted me closer, closer to death. An invasion of thoughts flooded my mind. Then all I could see was black. What had attacked my terrified mind?

 

 

The Light Julian

I was scouting through the forest like a hunter.
Trooping down my enemy… Tigress!
She was a feisty little beast always wanting to hunt down our kiwis.
She couldn’t escape from me now because I got a sniper rifle.
I can snipe her down because my bullet shoots like Usain Bolt.
Then I could hear steep bushy noises coming from the bush.
Then I went stealth mode 007 James Bond.
I peeked up like I was playing Hide and seek.
I saw Tigrees in a corner I reloaded and then.
She turned around… and then I saw a bright light…

 

 

night or day? 100 WC Karis

The lonely night was gradual forcing the moon across the silent sky. My thighs ached as bright red blood dripped onto my dirty feet. I stare up at the ruthless sky …and then I saw a bright light…
 I stumble to my scratched knees as my eyes roll in pain. I knew what it was: a phosphorescent vehicle. Brighter than day. As the night moved on I was stuck staring. The delicate light brightened the night to feel like day. It was out of this world; literally.
I grabbed my camera from out of my ripped pocket. ‘SNAP’ Suddenly the vehicle moved off into the lonely night.

 

 

Haunting thoughts 100WC


    Haunting thoughts

...And then I saw a bright light… My sight shattered. whoosh a black shadow in sight gazing watching my every movement. Whatever it was started to fade into the darkness it’s gone. The light started flickering bang Pitch black. The wind howling. Shadows appear and fade. My imagination haunts me to this day. who had attacked me? Suddenly it was there again. This time I saw it first. I froze.. To keep myself invisible I stopped breathing I didn’t dare blink. The evil eyes beamed like giant laser beams. “Don’t’ look,” I thought as I trembled with terror.

 

 

 

Alien

Evan
…And I saw a bright light… so I sprinted dawn the stars as fast as me legs code Cary me. I  went out the door and there it was. a dark green space ship. with a neon green alien with a big head and gigantic descanting eyes beside it. I  screamed in horror.      






Alana
The wind howled loudly, we were stuck in the middle of the sea, no food, no fish, and no bites! Just a tattered boat with no shelter and the grumpiest guy in the world, Uncle Stan at 58yrs, he’s been fishing for his whole life. Then a mysteries creature hit the boat, it compressed it. We Trembled, I stood, I could see Stan with a rod he hooked it around I heard a shriek, blood trickled down the edge, Stan grabbed it, it squirmed trying to get air, the scaly body slid through his fingers and drooped to the water…

 The Killer worm fish! Julian
 It was a late foggy stormy night. Frank brung out to sea… The Laser Jet 2000. He when out far but when I mean far I mean really far. No fishermen legends have ever been out that far, Ever… Frank could hear heavy gruff sounds upon the sea. His legs were shaking like an earthquake was happening. He finally got out his fishing rod. He felt something tugging on it. It pulled so hard he almost fell into the wavy sea. He finally got the fish and his eyes were wide open. The Fish ate him.

The Deadly Fish, Jayden

’'Heave’’ went Henry as he kept tugging. His arms were threatening to drop off; His legs ached like never before. ‘’What is this deadly monster’’ he wondered. With one last back breaking struggle Henry wrestled the fish on to the boat. Fish or….

There wriggling in front of him was a gigantic, monstrous, slimy fish bigger than a table. Henry whimpered, his eyes drooped down off his head like he just saw the first alien. The next thing he knew he was in the hospital sleepily getting interviewed on his amazingly astonishing catch. What just happened to me he wondered.


terrostrouss Corban

I whimpered in pain, my arms ached all over, I’ve been fighting for two hours suddenly everything stopped, I waited for the usual tugs, a large head of a strange eel-like creature burst out of the murky river mouth, I shrieked in terror… it had landed in the boat, its slender body reflected in the silver moon light, I had only realized it was night.


 A black stream of blood trickled down the grey fish, the fillets of meat gleamed in the moon light, the transparent scales covered the boat I turned, and why was the newly discovered fish gone?   

The Magic Worms Oscar


The Magic Worms
Ted was sitting in his boat one summers evening wondering, he was wondering whether to use his spare bait or to go back to shore. Finally he decided to go back to shore. When he got back he got into his brand new landrover and drove out to the street when he heard a  call saying “magic worms for sale!” so Ted pulled in and brought 5 worms for $3. Soon he was in his boat again putting on the first worm, he cast his line in when he felt a giant shaking the worm had transformed.


The fishing experience



From loads of fishing experiences, I was used to going overseas, catching man eating fish. I have learnt many things Over the past four years, collecting old bones and worn out skin.



One day, I went out fishing hoping I would catch the man eating fish of my dreams, now this time it would happen I was positive. So I launched my line in the exact spot I wanted it. Suddenly a fish launched flying spikes at the bottom of my boat big bangs we’re flashing like lightning. Luckily I had under water cameras watching sudden movements of the fish.

fishing Evan

It was a normal day. me and my bro Jason went fishing. I got one and it’s a big one. help! What you need. Get the net I've  almost got it. Now!Got it. Aah what is it. A ma, ma monster! Run for your life! Hey Where’s everybody going, ooh.




2 comments:

  1. Hello Alana! I LOVED your challenge and the creation of Uncle Stan as a character was excellent! Your second sentence is so good, it has well chosen vocabulary and the punctuation and structure of the words create an excellent image in my mind. It sounds as if you are talking especially to me as you have adopted a 'talk to the reader' style. Well done, keep writing!

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  2. Hi Corban, what an amazing story. It was a good idea to use the prompt as your opening line and I loved the way that you built the tension throughout your writing.You describe the creature in vivid terms and made me smile at the end of the story. Well done Jane Team 100wc

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