Friday, September 13, 2013

The Sweet Shop Cake Bonnie


The pink butter cream looked like it was whipped with a sharp knife. The sweets shop sign was sitting lightly on the butter cream. The lights inside shone on the sugar which made a little reflection on the wall. I couldn’t keep my eyes off it! A knife cut the cake, it was given to me, I reach out to grab the cake, smooth and crumbly just how I like it! I slowly put it in my mouth, it was like a pink butter cream explosion! The marshmallow was gooey, sticky and yummy! As that happened I could smell sticky candy canes. Delicious!

Bonnie

5 comments:

  1. Love this piece of writing Bonnie, wonderful with really delicious descriptions!
    Tracy

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  2. yum i'd love to have a cake like that!

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  3. Wow, what a delicious description!
    Tracy

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  4. wow bonnie good job.

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