The
pink butter cream looked like it was whipped with a sharp knife. The sweets
shop sign was sitting lightly on the butter cream. The lights inside shone on
the sugar which made a little reflection on the wall. I couldn’t keep my eyes
off it! A knife cut the cake, it was given to me, I reach out to grab the cake,
smooth and crumbly just how I like it! I slowly put it in my mouth, it was like
a pink butter cream explosion! The marshmallow was gooey, sticky and yummy! As
that happened I could smell sticky candy canes. Delicious!
Bonnie
Love this piece of writing Bonnie, wonderful with really delicious descriptions!
ReplyDeleteTracy
yum i'd love to have a cake like that!
ReplyDeleteWow, what a delicious description!
ReplyDeleteTracy
wow bonnie good job.
ReplyDeletewow good job.
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