alien by corban
… and then I saw a bright light… it had landed, the light
faded, I held on to the trunk of the pine I had clung on to for the support I so
dearly needed. I felt warmth creeping up my paralyzed body, I peered down at my
shoes, a thick gunk had set like cement I tried to wriggle, I screamed, the
door opened of the shuttle, a strange creature had scuttled out gripping a
stick, I reached for my rifle but the being was too fast its pale arms
glimmered in the moon light, it mumbled to me one single word… its mouth opened
“boo.”
Some very powerful descriptions here, well done! I love the way that you build tension into the story and then end with a twist. I enjoyed reading this so thank you for sharing it, Jane team 100wc
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