Tuesday, September 17, 2013

alien corban

                                                        room 8's 100 word challenge



alien by corban

… and then I saw a bright light… it had landed, the light faded, I held on to the trunk of the pine I had clung on to for the support I so dearly needed. I felt warmth creeping up my paralyzed body, I peered down at my shoes, a thick gunk had set like cement I tried to wriggle, I screamed, the door opened of the shuttle, a strange creature had scuttled out gripping a stick, I reached for my rifle but the being was too fast its pale arms glimmered in the moon light, it mumbled to me one single word… its mouth opened “boo.”    

1 comment:

  1. Some very powerful descriptions here, well done! I love the way that you build tension into the story and then end with a twist. I enjoyed reading this so thank you for sharing it, Jane team 100wc

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