Friday, September 13, 2013

The Dream Cake, Jayden



As I pulled it out of the oven steam flickered past my ears like tiny voices in the dark. Warm, milky liquid dripped down the side like a river flowing off a cliff. Blends of flake were bubbling, melting into a pool.
A smell of heaven wafted up my irritated nose. I sliced my knife into it and picked a piece up. Crumbled softness wrapped my hand like it was huddling for warmth. The moist, luscious mixture bathed my hand.
A chunky piece shedded down my throat. Devine layers of gooey caramel shattered mouth. The flake teased my full mouth. By now different textures unfolded down my throat like it was digging, searching for the golden center. It was now just a big pile of decadent chocolate climbing all over each other. To die for Kit Kat built up a big pile like a house under construction. Ribbons of cream twirled around every layer like cement keeping it together.
YUM!!!!

By Jayden

1 comment:

  1. That makes me want to drive around to your house and raid your biscuit tin!!! You make it sound so delicious with your descriptive vocabulary Jayden.

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