I whimpered in pain, my arms ached all over, I’ve been
fighting for two hours suddenly everything stopped, I waited for the usual
tugs, a large head of a strange eel-like creature burst out of the murky river
mouth, I shrieked in terror… it had landed in the boat, its slender body
reflected in the silver moon light, I had only realized it was night.
A black stream of blood trickled down the grey fish, the
fillets of meat gleamed in the moon light, the transparent scales covered the
boat I turned, and why was the newly discovered fish gone?
Great use of words in your story Corban.
ReplyDeleteWait until people read your Zombie story.