I scrutinize the
magical cake just standing in front of me. I see the significant caramel Oozing
down the sides combined with the rich chocolate caramel centre and the ripe
gigantic red Cherry on top .  I tuck my
hand under the cake and lift it up to my mouth. “Crunch” scrumptious flavour
“pop pop “ tropical divine Hawaiian taste splashing around. I smell the delicate
luscious icing spread.  Yummm.          
Hannah

 
Wow.... what great descriptive words you used. I really enjoyed your piece of writing.
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