The Fizzy volcano…
Hi my name
is Fizzy, most known as “the Fizzy volcano” why? Because I have really big
tantrums. But there is one huge tantrum
I’ve had, I’ll tell you… it was a school day and we had a new teacher, Mrs Bono
she was totally strict, I was writing while she was telling Nick off, after that he was really embarrassed. I couldn’t
wait to show Mrs Bono my writing, she would be so impressed. I was adding the
finishing touches then I walked up to her desk I gave my book to her. She
frowned, I screamed, all the noise stopped...
well done bonnie
ReplyDeletebrilliant bonnie the best piece of writing so far
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