Tuesday, June 18, 2013
A dark night
A dark night...
The wind howls loudly,
My heart pounds like a million drums,
I closed my eyes,
Whispers of wind brushes my face singing peaceful tunes,
A silent shadow fades in spits of rain,
Roars of trees graunching,
Leaves rustling,
Awful crys from shaking fences,
Pikelets bark fills the lonely air,
I open my eyes,
He stands there shaking,
I rush inside breathing in a warm smell of lipbalm and bubble gum.
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VERY GOOD WRITING EXTREMELY DESCRIPTIVE
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your writing Karis, Mr Anderson has been telling me about it. Who is he? I really do like the descriptive phrases you have included with using your senses. Well done
ReplyDeleteMrs McA
I like your write because!!!!everyone like your Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like your story write
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