Tuesday, June 4, 2013

My scary moment

As we creeped higher everything fell silent.My heart skipped a beat with dread.I could see dark skyscrapers hanging over the city.There was a small click.Hanging for a second more then we started to plumet down!!!Gasping for air the more we fell down.all sounds were drained out by the thin screaming of my brother.Is this going to end.A another gust of wind stabbed my throat.I knew it was going to end soon but it felt like forever.It felt like ten tones of  stone were locking  me into place.air whipping my face.I could barely breath with the speed we were going.then it stopped leaving me froven to the spot!!!

1 comment:

  1. Wow Heath, this writing has an amazing impact on me. Your personal voice could be mine when I sky dived from 10,000 feet. That ten tonnes of stone tells me that you were locked in time and space as you fell.
    Would you consider publishing this and asking the others too to do theirs so I can display them in the library?
    Mrs C

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