Tuesday, June 4, 2013

halloween Fright

As I opened the door to the halloween fright. people were dressed in scary cotumes, for some reason I
didn't feel scared. I looked up and saw a cave it looked freaky and unusual.

there was a massive truck beside the cave that had flames out the doors and zombies sticking out the mirrors. I saw a crowd of people outside playing with the ponys or on the trampeline or going in that threatenig cave. We went in the slide opening door there was a curtain, I thought that was quite unusual as well it was getting more freakier every minute. Now I was more freaked out because now I began to get in the excited mood I didn't know how I would cope with going in that cave.





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2 comments:

  1. Sounded pretty scary alright. Think you coped pretty well with everything jumping out at you. Exciting story, I just wanted to read more. :-)

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  2. very exciting read!!! Well done!

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