part 2 of Caught , bonnie

”This can’t be!” Alex said in a worried way, “I am definitely leaving “someone was watching Alex and it was driving him crazy, he hopped in the car “wait!” someone said oh! Alex completely forgot that he was with Ella, his friend, before she could get into the car, someone grabbed her and knocked her out before she could scream “why me!”.   Finding his way through the suspects’ house Alex found a mysterious sticky letter it said this: Find Ella pettifer and… where was the rest? “You there what are you doing in my house” busted Alex thought…. 

By Bonnie  

the body

…It was too late a dark body slithered down the rope with swords as sharp as death. My whole body froze; my eyes were glued to the swords. The body came towards me; the blade carved my chest as blood flowed down my body. This is it ……….I thought. The killing body fell to the ground with a hole in its back, as small as a finger nail. The long blond hair fell out of the mask. A girl about 20 years jumped off the ledge with a gun that just shot. Stay away from her she’s my deadly sister…...                  

KAELYN, message in a bottle.

Dear Philippine children...

 To those who are struggling in their life right now, right at this very moment i really must tell you something: You know its all right to be scared and you have every right to be, but its OK, because were going to help. The sympathy we give you i can not compare, for we are on your side,we will always be there. You probably have the world on your shoulders, your feelings are down, mainly because of your destroyed town. I wish you all the best and a lot of luck, and know to ask for help when stuck.

p.s ( Be strong and tall like the kahikatea trees and children at frankley!)

Death Heath,Philip

“Run now were in great danger.”

 A pair of blazing eyes glanced at me. A bullet scorched across the penetrating heat just missing Jacob.

” well that’s what I thought blood was coming out of his side like a cascade.”

“As I started ringing the police. He stepped out from behind the bush wait no it can’t be Jacobs wife had a gun pointed at her neck.

“Drop the phone now if you move she breathes her last breath.”

“Leave her she’s done nothing wrong it’s me you want to kill.”

With that the gun fired it tearing through me.

   

100wc RUN! oscar

 

I ran as fast as I could I never wanted to see this place again, or that guy he was the one, the one that killed my father in front of me. He was laughing when the knife cut across father’s throat. That fateful day, that man, the one that made me an orphan. I ran away with my sister after the remembering of that fateful day. My sister was a tall and very pretty girl with long black hair; she only just turned ten whilst I was fifteen. We ran to a cottage all the while trying to forget.

100WC Julian, Bryn

 “Do you have the keys?”

 “No but I think I know where we can find them.”

“Well we better hurry up before he recognizes us!”

 “Psst!” Did you hear that?

 “Hey over here!”

 Then this wrinkly hand popped out and grabbed them tight around the collar and pulled them into the hedge. Then a crusty old man said “What the heck are you doing here, your risking your life to death!” “Why?”

 “Because that man in that ancient house killed my parents while they were sleeping.” “Well we better find a way to escape from this place like Harry Houdini!”

watched

 

“Come on we have to go now”

 “Hang on”, a shadow swept over them a man appeared before them,

“I’m gasana I’ve come to explain who your being watched by he’s a man who has lived and died in this house six hundred years ago no one knows he’s name”. The three men dashed to the old house gasana reached for the door but it tumbled to the stone floor. A floor board creaked under the weight of the men. We just reached the end of the corridor when the man appeared, we charged for him, but he started fading.     

The face 100 WC Cody

The face

As saw looked down at Jim and Barry his creaky smile with blood dripping out, turned into a demonic laughing sound.” I can’t do this Barry” cried Jim “come on you baby it’s only a kid in a costume. Saw looked down but not for long within 5 seconds he disappeared from the room. ”AAAAAAHHHHHHHH” The door burst open and out came rushing a young child. “Kid stop” yelled   Barry. The kid stopped and turned around in an instant. He rushed into Jim's arms and then said “Are you going to arrest him, for killing my mom’’?

We know it's there. Hannah & Maia

The door creaked open ."it's behind us we have to Move now"said Bill. We sprint to the car screaming our heads of Squeak the car door opens there sat a girl with her blond hair glistening in the moonlight, blue eyes shining like the sun reflecting on the deep blue sea, she's wearing green clothes with a lollipop on it.

"I've been expecting you"said a voice sitting at the steering wheel 

"who are you."shouted Jason 

"I'm Candy." 

"Just drive there is a ghost called gasper chasing us."

"How do you now the name."

"I've seen him before.".........

Swimming pool

Maeghan, Kate, Janelle, and Dad we went to Swimming pool . We went to big pool and little pool and we went outside.  We saw Mr Riti  and we back inside We went to shop and buy Three Ice Block. We play tag and hide and seek.

 

 

 

 

Dear People Of The Philippines

For as long as you live your love will remain,
Safe in a bottle stored away,
Where ever you are your hope will increase,
Staying as one perfect piece,
Sprint like a cheetah, fly like a dove,
Just like something that you would love,
Don't run away from the biggest fight,
Sneak up from behind and give it a fright,
Your heart might be broken and filled with fear,
But don't worry everything you love is still right here,
In your heart there will be pain,
But everything will recover again.

Stay strong, stay here.

A letter in a bottle 100wc

           A letter in a bottle

You have a chance of hope let it free you will find what you are looking for.  Smile it will make some bodys day that little bit better, and even on the darkest day you’ll find light. You might feel like giving up but don’t, your heart may be broken but it will be sealed fast. From now and on things will get better.

oscar 100wc typhoon

 

Don’t  let yourself sink to the depths of sadness. Never turn the light off for good, keep them on like a night light and work towards the main light. Remember there is always a light switch even in the darkest room.  Just think ahead of yourself. Light still flickers all you have to do is find it.your heart may be shattered but piece it back together with love. If your feeling sad then just smile and it will bring back special memory’s. don’t give up, hope will  be around the corner just keep believing and your belief will come true.

A letter in a bottle Heath

I no times are tough.But keep persisting if you do you might find the lighten out of the dark world.You may have lost something important to you.But remember if you can cope there is hope.most of the world is support ing you

A letter in a bottle, Bonnie

                                                                                   A letter in a bottle…

Every cloud has a silver lining and yours is here, it’s us we’re here, we’re helping like a heart being sealed, you have been brave so don’t stop now.  Not everything has gone away you’ve still got you and you’ll find everything out soon, just follow your heart and you’ll be there.  

A letter in a bottel to philippines by jordan 100wc

A LETTER IN A BOTTLE

20/11/13

I want to first say that we all put our heads down for all of the Philippines out there, we are all sad for the lives of your children and family, some people have  have experienced something like that so that's bad, we would come and help.

We all think it’s harsh, I think because the  Philippines are getting there homes destroyed.

We all will get the feeling that you guys had. From Jordan from frankley primary school.

 

 

PS: hope you all the best! J

A letter in a bottle

A letter in a bottle

When nothing turns to everything, disaster turns to hope and hate turns to love. There’s always one glimpse of light even if you can’t see it you can always believe it. Hope will always come back even if things are at its worst. People that are gone will always be with you in your hearts. Never give up you should always believe, Even if things aren't going your way. Never give up hope.      

100WC Julian A Letter in A bottle.

A Letter in a bottle

Never give up. I know it must be really hard with no food or a house. Hope, Love and courage will be all around you, we will give you as much support and hope ever you could possibly wish for in your life. Don’t think what’s ahead of you think what’s coming at you. Become persistent and more confident then it will be a new life. Forget what happened and start a new life! Find ways to survive if you get stuck you should always know we will support you always be there for you. You will be a star!  

100WC:)

A LETTER IN A BOTTLE

Your heart might be broken,

but there’s still hope to come.

 Everything will change its just starting to come.

Behind the corner your dream will come true

 everything will be all right we promise you.

 Giving money for charity is a good thing to do

 but the best thing ever is to stay by you.

Be safe and don’t let anything pass,

 you keep your hope, keep it forever.

 Hope is all you really need,

 to survive this really horrible tragedy.

a letter in a bottle

                 A Letter In A Bottle

I know your homes are lost and maybe so are your family and friends. So I am writing to you to keep your hopes up, keep on going, never  give up because if you do give up it wont get any better. If I could do any thing to help you right now I would. The bright path has disappeared and a dark shadow has taken its place. I wish this wasn't happening to you infact I wish this didn't happen at all because no country in the world needs this. So I hope this has helped you to not give up other wise I would have written this for nothing. From Bryn

grandads dairy

 

   dear diary



day one in the trenches and already my friend is shot luckily i'm the trenches medic, he would of died. going to sleep is rough, with lice and the smell of rotting bodies, I wonder if the war will be over by Christmas.

were finally moving trenches, its on a beach, were going to be watching for any boats carrying ground troops.
I've just spotted a spec in the horizon its probably nothing but i'm keeping a eye on it its bigger now I can identify it a carrier eve alerted the general he says we should search it so i'm off to search it.


i'm back home safe and in bed its good to be back


 

typhoone Thomas 100wc

                          Letter in a bottle

 

I know how  you feel I know what it’s like to miss someone, I have a friend Josh who is away but this is worse you might have lost your family or a friend.

I have lost a friend I can’t remember his name but

All I know is that we were best friends. I hope your

City will recover but light is on your side your ok know. “So pick up the pieces and build a proper

House. Bye singing that it is saying you can build a new life and if you go down pick yourself up.

A letter in a bottle Maia

Dear children,

Everyone has a heart and now yours is broken.
Your in danger and we are going to help you we will send you some food and water.
We feel so sorry for you.
Just stay safe and warm and we will be there soon.

a letter in a bottle corban

                                         A letter in a bottle

 

People in the Philippines, if you give up its precious life wasted. I’ve never been in a typhoon but I know what it feels like, there will always be light in the darkest cave. Your hope may be diminished but you should be restoring your hope gradually, people all over the world feel sympathy for you but none have as much as me. you should still have a burning heart so you can continue. If you still have a home  if you have food or water because please share if you do it will save one more precious person’s life.      

Lachlan Birthday

                                    Lachlan Birthday

It is Lachlan Birthday on Saturday. I hope Lachlan have big surprise  Birthday. We got him a Present. Then Lachlan like it. Happy birthday Lachlan! Lachlan turn 19 and Lachlan have big birthday party.

My mum and I  made a Banana Cake. We put butter sugar flower banana  milk eggs mix together and put icing on cake.We Baking a cake. Lachlan take a cake.  Happy Happy song. I like Lachlan Birthday party.

 

 

                                                        from Maeghan

                         

                     

                        

 

 

   

Personification Poem, Mr Anderson

Mr Anderson's Personification Poem (sort of inspired by Corban!)

The scissors danced across the pages

They waved and waved as if to say goodbye

That was the last time I would see the paper cry

The day my pen mourned for more

Personification Poem

 

The chainsaw ate through the tree

Biting it in three

The tree started to weep

As the chainsaw fell asleep

Aletter in a bottle Cody 100 word challenge

A letter in a bottle

Don’t think about what’s happing now, think about what’s to come. Now you may be at the bottom but the only way you can go is up. The danger is over and brightness is right around the corner. You may have lost your house but you haven’t lost your home because your home is where your heart is. The best thing that you can have is hope. If things around you are falling down at lest you know the worst is over. If someone helps you, you help them back and start a help chain.

A letter in a bottle, Jayden

Don’t pull yourselves down. Think of what’s ahead of you in the future, even though you have lost family friends you are ok and people are flooding in to help you. Our support is with you we will make you stronger and give you the fight to live on. If you get angry at yourself that’s just working you up and making you mad, but it’s not your fault. There will always be light under the darkest destruction. Find your way out and you will have confidence to carry on. Just follow your hearts instructions.

Remembering.........

Remembering.......

 Remembering the war is a hard thing and remembering what they did is even harder.wars starting and lives are ending as well as our country. Innocent peoples lives die with there soulless body lying there covered in blood and  footprints. 

Water from peoples eyes quickly create a river from the people they onced love.Houses flood as well as love.Gunshots shatter as they hit the flesh of the warm moving body.Peoples hart broken as screams filled the city. years go by and bodies turn into skullatons, war turns into peace and seeds turn into flowers.

Remembering........

Every night I lay in bed thinking about my Poppa.He was very sick and laid  In a hospital bed he looked fine,but he felt terriable.I woke up one morning thinking what will I do with out him,Mum said " please give the phone to dad".Suddenly dad said that "poppa is dead",we all cry so hard we didn't have any tears left.

My first day at school, Kate

I remember when it was my first day at school and my class hosted assembly  and I got my first class photo. I went from room 12, 1, 4, 5, 9, to room8. In my first class I made a new friend and her name was called Ellie, she was a nice friend, she was always helpful and caring, we always played together.

A grandchilds worst nightmare Luke

My heart was struck with deep sadness and heartbreaking emotions. I was inspired with courage to never give up and to get out of life's obstacles and move on with my adventure. I should really think of moving on and forgetting that moment. Death is tear dropping life enders. And life you need to make a real strong effort and also make the most of it. 

FEAR

Remembering…

Fear; that stuck like gum on a side-walk. As harmful as silent cries, that hung the walls like streamers of blood…

The 27^th of June 1836. The violent summer had given me a cold start to winter. My poor family had nowhere to live and nothing to eat. The past murders from the mysterious wolverine had given me nightmares, night after night dreaming of who was next. My father was weak from hunger. I was well, but I wasn’t expecting to live without him.

how the war all started by philip

                              How the war all started                          

It all started with swords and bows. Upgrading to horses, spares and shields. Then gun powder appeared with pirates and much more war .The ones that hated the pirates most of all the English . Oh well, using gun powder they invented canons and shotguns. Then a 1000 years or so big polluting tanks and sips that are making the world a more horrible place . Polluting the air and  streets. And worst of all many homeless people lost their lives gearing the war same as the solders risking their lives for the people of the world.                                                                                                                                                        

                                                                                 

By Philip Palmer

               ….REMEBERING….wc                 

                                                     

“HAY!!! HAY!!!! Wake up josh said. “W-what happened I said “don’t you remember

 

Herobrine broke out of jail, “come on let’s get back to the base

“t-the what the base come on man let’s go! “Ah I said as I straggled to walk

“W-where am I “you’re in New Zealand 4028 ok you got that ok. AH

Everything went black. SPLASH “WA what where am I “you’re in area fifty one

Son the only safe place on earth come on let’s come on let’s get your

Memory back “what area 50 what.” Sit down son ok pull the switch “the what

Boop boop boop BIZZZZZZ.      by Thomas

The fish pie accident,Bonnie

The Fish Pie Accident

I remember the first time I ate fish pie, not a good feeling just looking back at it.  The taste was well… fishy, as my mum got back into the kitchen I grabbed a spoonful and ate it, waddled to the window (luckily it was open) and spit it out ungratefully.  Mum made a face that meant this: oh Bonnie seriously, I chuckle as she wipes me up. Knock knock mum says “that must be daddy back from work” as she puts her piece of pie on her plate, she runs to the door, she was right it was dad. Mum tells him what happened and dad just laughs suddenly mum laughs as well, I just have a big grin on my face.

remebering wc Thomas

                                                     ….REMEBERING….                 

                                                     

“HAY!!! HAY!!!! Wake up josh said. “W-what happened I said “don’t you remember Herobrine broke out of jail, “come on let’s get back to the base

“t-the what the base come on man let’s go! “Ah I said as I straggled to walk

“W-where am I “you’re in New Zealand 4028 ok you got that ok. AH

Everything went black. SPLASH “WA what where am I “you’re in area fifty one

Son the only safe place on earth come on let’s  get your

Memory back " area 50 what.” Sit down son ok pull the switch “the what

Boop boop boop BIZZZZZZ.      

 

 

 

......remebering....... by jordan

as i dream into the olden days my  dreams tear apart, i struggle but it just comes to me when i sleep so this is how it goes. it was one evening we are boarding the boat as i step onto the boat i cant go BACK! we board land and we journey into the big black forest we are all .....remembering.....
this why i tell you this to journey back into our secret olden days(1865)  so we also go even more back when nothing could be easy, we Had olden rail tracks that you Had to push clatter CLANK!
                                                                  15/11/13
                                                                  100wc
 

Death wish Cody 100 WC

Death Wish

“Run” I screamed to my platoon as German troops and tanks closed in on us. Those were the last memories of the best team possible……..Remembering…….. is to…..gruesome and painful. If only I could get them back Cpt Price, Pvt Mackintosh and Sgt James Ramirez. In that team I had the best weapons, armour and melee (hand to hand combat). I was stuck in this German prison that wasn’t  very good on hospitality. The only reason I’m alive is because they made me watch as my squad was torched then killed. This is why I have a death wish.      

concussion

Boom! Click click. I jumped on my bike and sprinted down the hill I’m in the first corner. Crack, i fell off my bike. Next thing I know I’m in the car racing to the hospital

The Battle Heath!

"On three"commander Smith yelled.1 2 3  we jumped up the bank.A shell exploded over our head.Davision fell unconcious on the dirt."we need a medic"yelled Baker.we've  lost Smith

the war

…remembering… my squad was captured by four Japanese scouts two of my friends had been shot. As blood gathered on the cold cobble stone floor, I knew what they've been doing, torcher…

Blood trickled down my whipped back, “what is your message you are to deliver to the general?” I coughed up yet another lot of blood as I tried to speak, the Japanese torturer then screamed three choices, tell the message and my team freed, have my squad to be tortured until death or me. I was in cell when I reached for my guard’s Colt I thought damn Japanese…        

100WC Oscar Remembering

Today I’m …remembering… I’m remembering my great granddad that died. He was a great fire man and he died defending his troop who was putting out a fire. The volley of bullets ripped up the earth one striking him in the arm and chest he was taken away buy his fellow comrades. He was taken to the British hospital but slowly the life drained out of him. He was buried at the cemetery relatives came and put flowers on his grave.

The night of terror, Jayden 100wc

…Remembering… the night of terror drains the blood from my body every time I think about it. I tense up just thinking of the ghastly night. Flashing images start churning up, blocking my mind. I struggle back to bed, horrified of dreaming the dream. The echoing of the wind whirls around haunting me deep inside.

I tuck right down into my bed burying myself from the open world outside. Storm clouds rolled through my stomach raining down on my soul. I know my parents will never return, and it drowns me down thinking of it, but I will live on.