Wednesday, November 13, 2013

The night of terror, Jayden 100wc


…Remembering… the night of terror drains the blood from my body every time I think about it. I tense up just thinking of the ghastly night. Flashing images start churning up, blocking my mind. I struggle back to bed, horrified of dreaming the dream. The echoing of the wind whirls around haunting me deep inside.

I tuck right down into my bed burying myself from the open world outside. Storm clouds rolled through my stomach raining down on my soul. I know my parents will never return, and it drowns me down thinking of it, but I will live on.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jayden,
    Wow...you really have me feeling this dreadful emotion. I especially like the image of storm clouds rolling through your stomach. I am unclear of 'drowns me down'. This is not an expression I am familiar with but I think you mean you are distraught. Thank you for your efforts.
    Ms Wilson (team 100 Canada)

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