The animal catastrophe!
Shaking with
terror, it screamed ferociously as it swung towards me, this was the worst time
EVER to come to the zoo. Its midnight at brooklyns zoo and the animals
have gone completely MAD!
I have come
to feed the animals and somehow they’re acting really strange. Maybe the zoo
keepers feed them new food?
Anyway…………this
is what those weird animals are up to:
1) The giraffes are shaking like rattle
snakes!
2) The pigs are walking like the meerkats!
3) The flamingos are spinning on their
heads!
And 4) Is the terrifying APE! And I told you that he swung towards
me. When I approached his cage he clenched to the metal and …………it stared at me
behind the bars………he was strangely becoming calm and everything had stopped.
Very discriptive Kaelyn well done! also I like how you put 1 2 3 of what the animals were doing once again well done!
ReplyDeleteBonnie
Wow Kaelyn, what a great story! You had my attention from the very start....such a good beginning to the story, well done.
ReplyDeleteTracy
Wow Kaelyn
ReplyDeletewow!! Kaelyn what a captivating story, an awesome use of descriptive words and similies, keep up your great writing!!
ReplyDeleteMum, Dad and Kalissa xxx