THE JAIL TRIP
Here we are,
jail, the place I never thought I would go. When we walked off the bus I felt a
shiver down my spine, as we entered the building a nice friendly lady welcomed
our class, it wasn’t as dark as I thought it would be, we walked through the
hall entering where the prisoners go ( not really sure what it’s called) my
shoes squeak annoyingly on the floor. I stare at a miserable prisoner, it
stared at me from behind the bars (I said <it> because I didn’t know if
<it> was a girl or a boy) <it> seemed to have a lonely soul (or a
cold soul) wanting to have a friend. I wondered if <it> was actually
guilty…
Awesome bonnie!
ReplyDeletei love your descripted language like when you said: i felt a shiver down my spine!
What a great story Bonnie! It was a creepy story (in a good way!)
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