Wednesday, December 4, 2013

.........And then the noise stopped...........

It went silent, the sky grew darker  pieces of paper  blew everywhere people shut the blinds in their house and were staring through the middle of them, while I was walking on the street, for once peace was in the country.It was dark every day ,every week, every month and every year.The people started to come out to get what they need they had ripped clothes they looked like zombies they inched their way forward the sky grew lighter as it grew lighter the people started to change back to what they were.The Blinds were now open.











Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Attack, Heath


 

It started I took a dive for the table smash a light shattered above me. Bang another rattle of gun fire thudded into the table. I didn’t think to pull out my own gun a desert eagle I only had 3 rounds after the last attack. I heard a scream they had got him my brother gone

 “I have to escape now there was no time they would get me to if I didn’t leave.”  “Run was the only word in my head like a bad memory being stuck on a wall.” I fired a bullet scoring a direct hit and then the noise stopped.

 

Deafaning, Jayden


I was sheltering under the table. The deafening sound was breaking through the hollow walls. I shrilled for it to stop but the irritating sound just kept going, teasing me. My ears started to ache, my anger within was building up quicker than the speed of light. The sound was now echoing so loud that lights started smashing, windows shattered and the sapphire blue lakes formed giant waves. I don’t think I can last much longer. …And then the noise stopped… Lights stopped swinging, windows stopped shaking and waves died down to a gentle splash. Finally my ears feel alright!

the beast corban


…and then the noise stopped… a flash escaped from the ruby red eye blinded me, startled I began to spin around but the beast gripped me by my waist I let a shrill scream, the teeth sank deep in my chest and thighs but yet it didn’t kill me, I tried to pries the jaws off but the teeth are curved, I swayed helplessly in the jaws of the beast that was carrying me to a cave the inky black covered me, my vision is going blurred then went black. My lifeless body slumped to the ground the beast drew back it’s and started roaring.    

The shrieking Cody 100 WC


The shrieking noise was coming from the big black house at the end of the street. Mr Miller lived down the end of the street in that black house. Mr Millar had two sons that died in a car crash and ever since then he’s been acting all strange. Oh by the way my names Billy and was dared to go into the house for 20 seconds by my friend Josh. I started to walk up the dark black driveway. As I walked up to the door and opened it the noise stopped and the door locked on me.

Sunday, December 1, 2013

Cousin's House

Their names are George, Will, and Sophie. They have a beach at opedo  bay in the Coromandell. We will Swim in the sea and go fishing in a boat. We will have heaps of barbeques  at night. It takes 6 hours in the car to get there. We will stop in Otorahonga  for lunch.   I will have McDonalds. Maeghan and I will have our iPod in the car so We will not be board. 


               
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  
 
  
 
 
   
 
 
 

Friday, November 29, 2013

part 2 of Caught , bonnie


”This can’t be!” Alex said in a worried way, “I am definitely leaving “someone was watching Alex and it was driving him crazy, he hopped in the car “wait!” someone said oh! Alex completely forgot that he was with Ella, his friend, before she could get into the car, someone grabbed her and knocked her out before she could scream “why me!”.   Finding his way through the suspects’ house Alex found a mysterious sticky letter it said this: Find Ella pettifer and… where was the rest? “You there what are you doing in my house” busted Alex thought…. 

By Bonnie  

Wednesday, November 27, 2013

the body

…It was too late a dark body slithered down the rope with swords as sharp as death. My whole body froze; my eyes were glued to the swords. The body came towards me; the blade carved my chest as blood flowed down my body. This is it ……….I thought. The killing body fell to the ground with a hole in its back, as small as a finger nail. The long blond hair fell out of the mask. A girl about 20 years jumped off the ledge with a gun that just shot. Stay away from her she’s my deadly sister…...                  

KAELYN, message in a bottle.

Dear Philippine children...
 To those who are struggling in their life right now, right at this very moment i really must tell you something: You know its all right to be scared and you have every right to be, but its OK, because were going to help. The sympathy we give you i can not compare, for we are on your side,we will always be there. You probably have the world on your shoulders, your feelings are down, mainly because of your destroyed town. I wish you all the best and a lot of luck, and know to ask for help when stuck.
p.s ( Be strong and tall like the kahikatea trees and children at frankley!)

Death Heath,Philip


“Run now were in great danger.”

 A pair of blazing eyes glanced at me. A bullet scorched across the penetrating heat just missing Jacob.

” well that’s what I thought blood was coming out of his side like a cascade.”

“As I started ringing the police. He stepped out from behind the bush wait no it can’t be Jacobs wife had a gun pointed at her neck.

“Drop the phone now if you move she breathes her last breath.”

“Leave her she’s done nothing wrong it’s me you want to kill.”

With that the gun fired it tearing through me.

   

100wc RUN! oscar

 

I ran as fast as I could I never wanted to see this place again, or that guy he was the one, the one that killed my father in front of me. He was laughing when the knife cut across father’s throat. That fateful day, that man, the one that made me an orphan. I ran away with my sister after the remembering of that fateful day. My sister was a tall and very pretty girl with long black hair; she only just turned ten whilst I was fifteen. We ran to a cottage all the while trying to forget.

100WC Julian, Bryn

 “Do you have the keys?”
 “No but I think I know where we can find them.”
“Well we better hurry up before he recognizes us!”
 “Psst!” Did you hear that?
 “Hey over here!”
 Then this wrinkly hand popped out and grabbed them tight around the collar and pulled them into the hedge. Then a crusty old man said “What the heck are you doing here, your risking your life to death!” “Why?”

 “Because that man in that ancient house killed my parents while they were sleeping.” “Well we better find a way to escape from this place like Harry Houdini!”

Tuesday, November 26, 2013

watched


 

“Come on we have to go now”

 “Hang on”, a shadow swept over them a man appeared before them,

“I’m gasana I’ve come to explain who your being watched by he’s a man who has lived and died in this house six hundred years ago no one knows he’s name”. The three men dashed to the old house gasana reached for the door but it tumbled to the stone floor. A floor board creaked under the weight of the men. We just reached the end of the corridor when the man appeared, we charged for him, but he started fading.     

The face 100 WC Cody

The face

As saw looked down at Jim and Barry his creaky smile with blood dripping out, turned into a demonic laughing sound.” I can’t do this Barry” cried Jim “come on you baby it’s only a kid in a costume. Saw looked down but not for long within 5 seconds he disappeared from the room. ”AAAAAAHHHHHHHH” The door burst open and out came rushing a young child. “Kid stop” yelled   Barry. The kid stopped and turned around in an instant. He rushed into Jim's arms and then said “Are you going to arrest him, for killing my mom’’?

We know it's there. Hannah & Maia

The door creaked open ."it's behind us we have to Move now"said Bill. We sprint to the car screaming our heads of Squeak the car door opens there sat a girl with her blond hair glistening in the moonlight, blue eyes shining like the sun reflecting on the deep blue sea, she's wearing green clothes with a lollipop on it.
"I've been expecting you"said a voice sitting at the steering wheel 
"who are you."shouted Jason 
"I'm Candy." 
"Just drive there is a ghost called gasper chasing us."
"How do you now the name."
"I've seen him before.".........