…Slowly the sky got darker… Stalking clouds crept across,
closing in on their prey. Panic flooded the minds of helpless citizens. A vast
area off the moons light crumbled away joining the dark side. A swarm off black
birds glided through the night. Black
trickling blood invaded the earth leaving nothing but one eerie colour, Black.
Darker, darker, darker.
Suddenly the blackness faded away like a breaking jigsaw
puzzle. Cracks trailed their way through the darkness making rivers of light.
Torn up pieces of black shredded all over the sky. Panic was washed out of
everyone leaving no fear. What had blanketed over our world.
Exceptionally effective simile and metaphors Jayden that makes me, the reader really want to enter your world. I'm thinking that you are simply capturing one moment in time, but I WANT MORE!
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Some cracking images painted here Jayden, well done. It looks like you checked your spelling, whch is good, but be sure you have the right word, i.e., of for off. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWell done I really enjoyed your pst because you used words and intresting phrases that was a fab post!
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