The ground trembled as the lightning struck the earth,
setting the tree it split in half, ablaze. The glass shattered to pieces as the
wind pressed against it, dirt stirred in the wind, more thunder boomed
overhead, my face drained of colour as I meet the heavy rain. The violent storm
was looming over the city, it’s inky blackness consumed me as if it was a
human.
The wind pulled down a house like nothing was there , the
lake overwhelmed the sea wall , sprinting away from the gushing water I knew it
wouldn’t be long until I was swept away
Hi Corban.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this 100wc. The way you have brought this storm to life is truly fantastic - your face draining of colour, the inky blackness consuming you - I loved it!
Just remember to check before submitting - the last sentence is a little long.
Wonderful writing,
Mr Connor
Team 100wc
Hi corban
ReplyDeleteI really LIKE your 100wc because you use lots of long words. I liked the part when you said it's inky blackness cosumed you.
From Katherine